Wednesday, 10 September 2014

PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking

I will leave the audience hanging

His lips were quivering, goosebumps crawling up his arm like a spider.
Sweat began to drip down off his head. He started to shake like a tree in the wind. Just imagining what was going to happed next…

Can you tell what emotion I've in my writing