Friday, 14 November 2014

WALT: Write about if i was a animal what would I be.
If I  could be a animal I would be a brown and black guard dog so I can protectd my famiy. haveing  a job in the house would be cool.  It would be cool to hlep the world and make the world be a safe place.

Monday, 3 November 2014

Show don't tell

WALT show not tell in our writing

He  had a huge smile on his face. Jumping up and down. Laying before him was dark blue waves. Putting one foot in front of the other. The waves pounding on me. Paddling back to the soft boiling sand covering myself with it jumping up and running back to the  waves.Sinking into the dark shining  sand pulling my feet out. Jumping out into the shining waves. Seeing  the sand flying through the air - bam it hit my  face  saying I am going to get you back. Just thinking what the rest of the day was going to be like...